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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by MDproskater, Mar 5, 2008.

  1. MDproskater

    MDproskater Well-Known Member

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    Well, here is my newest. Three versions of it, please tell me which one you like the most, along with your thoughts. :P

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    I like the idea but imo it's overdone. It's too messy and at first I wasn't able to say what the render was.

    But the effects are cool try to low the contrast and it may be a really great sig. Keep it up :-)
     
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    MDproskater Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. I think what over-contrasted it was the last black to white gradient map (luminosity) I put. I had a feeling it looked more depthy without it.
     
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    Hmmm. Try taking out that clipping mask on the bottom left there. It seems to obstruct the natural flow of it all. That and those funny black symbols that look grainy and oversharpened on the right. Take those out too. I think without those and without the clipping mask, the flow would be better, and it would overall look nicer.
     
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    Thanks.

    I put that clipping mask there because I thought everyone on here would say the left it too plain lol. I thought without the black kanji-type writting, everyone would say it's too plain as well.
     
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    It might be, but I can't really see in my head what it will look like, so if possible, try posting a version without the clipping mask and kanji. :)
     
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    I just opened CS3, so I'll see if I can do it without messing up any applied image layers.

    Btw, I love that first tag in your signature. :)
     
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    This is really really nice. I love the Asian style and I think you did a really good job creating that atmosphere. The only thing is probably the text on the left, they're kind of not contributing to the flow.
     
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    the top to ar prob the best i like the coliurs but i think u ve got way to much going on and its kinda messy so maybe take some things out.i know its hard coz the colous look nice but like ur render thingy isnt the main thing.Its kinda lost in all the other stuff thats going on in the tag.
     
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    wayy to much goin on main
     
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    Thanks for the comments. :)
     

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